David Lombardino | DLA Editors — Editorial & ConsultingReviews of dlaeditors.com

David provided enormously helpful feedback on my draft manuscript. This included many general and substantive comments to improve the plot, clarify the character arc, and keep the reader engaged, as well as numerous detailed suggestions for tightening the narrative. David is really meticulous and thinks about how every sentence and paragraph might be improved, ways to make every part of the plot more convincing, and creative ways of conveying information to the reader. He also provides useful references illustrating how to sharpen story telling. I appreciate his timely responsiveness to questions over email.

David was exceptional to work with. His attention to detail is on another level. He didn’t just correct grammar or polish sentences, he elevated the entire manuscript. Every suggestion was thoughtful, precise, and clearly rooted in a deep understanding of structure, tone, and narrative flow. What stood out most was the value add. David approached the project like a true partner, not just an editor. He strengthened arguments, sharpened themes, and helped clarify ideas without ever diluting my voice. The end result is materially better because of his involvement. If you are looking for an editor who brings rigor, insight, and genuine investment in your work, I highly recommend him.

I am unhappy with the editing style feedback. Namely, the format is not designed for 1st time writers, hard to decipher and rather intimidating. I have tried to the open communicating however it is is a non motivator and the drag it was to lose an entire chapter the way the app is set up has derailed me from wanting to write it again. Overall, I would prefer someone that is open to communication and free to ask questions without the fear of getting a bill on top of the re-editing fee.

The reviews were very helpful in streamlining my application

it was a good experience. Provided me with good feedback and guidance about my Personal statement.

They use chat gpt or other AI tool to concise your PS. The service they provide that can be easily done by your colleagues also. Nothing special.

David Lombardino is very professional. I recommend him highly!

The edit was completed on time and was thorough.