Ronin
Adorable, I suggest a few adjustments though
I absolutely love this book and how it was made to include a character that looks like my son. The one thing I would change is the strange uncommon words in a children’s book. Though I can appreciate the rhyming scheme, the words need to be simpler and easier to understand for young learners. I would also suggest featuring the age group it is directed towards. Lovely story, sweet story line and AMAZING artwork
Response from Magic StoryNov 9, 2025
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback Ronin. We are actually implementing your feedback to make the books a bit simpler for young learners like your son to understand. It's input like this that helps us continue to improve Magic Story. All the best!