Paul G.
Superior screenplay analysis
The professionally written report arrived on time, as promised The standard was the best I have seen, and I have seen many. I would hope that anyone else with a script of this genre might save themselves a lot of time by requesting IS coverage and development analysis. Most of the suggestions for script improvement were excellent, and I had no trouble seeing the logic behind most suggestions I sensed that the consultant saw where I am heading, did not over-impose his/her opinions, did not harass me for fictionalising part of a biopic,and left me in no doubt that I should keep pushing the script quality beyond the four nominations that the script received this week. As to locating the script's position in the marketplace, this was perhaps the weakest part of the IS analysis. The consultant mainly talked about the age group most likely to attend the movie, and he/she put forward the view that I should be forthcoming in any pitch sessions that the major audience would be older. Other reviewers have given me a different opinion and so I might have to make a decision about strengthening a young supporting role. Paul Gross [Diminuendo]

